tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3496868506345590292.post5770657001609137535..comments2023-08-25T08:20:02.925-04:00Comments on Holly Hill: Flash Fiction Friday #2Holly Hillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07901177289663629475noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3496868506345590292.post-23097614334121455132011-03-18T10:06:26.846-04:002011-03-18T10:06:26.846-04:00This is so good, Holly! I know--writing this is so...This is so good, Holly! I know--writing this is so helpful. I had to delete so many words to not past 300, and it's helping me see how I tend to bog down my writing with unnecessary details. :)Pam Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09872183610393667619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3496868506345590292.post-50706706843757315882011-03-18T09:20:41.085-04:002011-03-18T09:20:41.085-04:00Thanks, Quita! I've never been a short story ...Thanks, Quita! I've never been a short story writer, so these exercises are really doing me good!Holly Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901177289663629475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3496868506345590292.post-15126486435939314762011-03-18T08:45:14.737-04:002011-03-18T08:45:14.737-04:00Aw :D That was cute--and the dialogue was really g...Aw :D That was cute--and the dialogue was really good. It was believable and there was a nice flow to it. You're pretty good at flash fiction!Marquita Hockadayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15931541485018513281noreply@blogger.com