So, number one on my revision list for my WIP is character development. Not necessarily for the main character either, though she'll get her share of attention.
Right now, I'm focusing on my supporting characters and how to bring their personalities to life without bogging the story down.
That's a tall order to fill, and probably one of the most important.
What did I do? Well, I made a spreadsheet of course. ;)
I'm not sure if you can see that very well, but it's a quick-reference sheet of sorts. I have physical traits, age, interests, and the GMC (Goal, Motivation, Conflict) for each character listed for easy reference. So when I'm revising, I have my bullet list of what I'm looking to add/change, and my one-page spreadsheet on characters. That way if I hit a spot and go, hmm, would Blair really say this here? I can glance at the list and know my Yale-bound mathlete probably would not.
And it's funny how the smallest changes can have such a large impact on the sound and overall presentation of a character. It's not even necessarily about what they say so much as how they say it sometimes. :)
What do you do to help define characters? Any tips you'd like to share with me?